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Tuesday, 29 May 2018
Writing - Term 2
Braydon is learning to re-read to check his writing and add detail to his work.
I love that you are not afraid to take risks and try new words / ideas in your writing like your simile here "The Milky Way is like a tornado". Don't forget to underline words you are unsure of.
I love that you are not afraid to take risks and try new words / ideas in your writing like your simile here "The Milky Way is like a tornado". Don't forget to underline words you are unsure of.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Bray. Football pictures, and writings about outer space & XBOX - who's son are you again? :-)
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